J. Haux

It doesn't really feel like poetry, as there's not really a rhythm...Know what? I'll just trust you. :D "I thought he had already found it?": He finds it about three ...

Oh! I like those books, too. I thought there were more of the Earth Sea books, though, or are they 'companion books'? I've only read three, so I guess I ...

How would I know?

With a weary sigh his essence, his soul rose revisit a time long forgotten. " When he gets particularly emotional his body responds...or something like that. ...Oh--*slaps forehead* It's fine. ...

First of all, I'm really picking with most of this because I had to copy and paste it on here because I can't see it at the bottom of the ...

Hi Jessica! Yes, I'm the friend who's helping her around. :D Hope you have fun on here! ~Jacquie~

Oh--you did post it twice! He spaced the paragraphs for us so we could read it (I read it anyway...most of it). I've never seen the & sign used in ...

Out of curiosity, why is this called "Bound for Glory"? It doesn't seem to fit...Samuel Garrison's plight seems to be the opposite... There's a lot of energy in this, I ...

Who's getting silly?! there a clown behind me? 8-[

^a Christian :D

Yes, please do. ~Jacquie~

Sorry, those were my typos--except for 'sunrize'. (please don't be mad, Searria) Searria is my 10-year-old sister. For some reason she can't join, so she's using my account. I'll have ...

Hello, hello, hello! Welcome to YWS...finally. :wink: I'm Jacquie, and I'm more of a reviewer myself. If you have any questions or anything, feel free to PM. I may not ...

The eyes are beautiful, as is her expression! Nice! Others have seen it: the area you could most improve in is shading. In addition to what they said, try to ...

I'm sorry, could you please explain what it is you did? Then I can appreciate it more. :D